Tuesday, June 10, 2008

She Turns

She Turns

She turns around,
facing him, now
staring fixated, for a moment, on his features.

His, once stunningly clear, face seems contorted, and unfamiliar.

Moving forward, her eyes become wide,
hoping to find some sense of meaning.

His face, now blank, says nothing.

It’s over.

She turns around,
facing herself now
watching curiously, as her features slowly become defined.

Then recognition,
and a slight smile, as she continues ahead.

© Jessica-Thoughtful Reflections


Anonymous Mom said...

You should have this published....its powerful.

Arv said...

That feeling is a real downer but its better to come back to life from an illusion.

Nice words Jessica... have a nice day,... Cheers...

Anonymous said...

I like your poem.

A New Yorker said...

Hope all is well.

Here, There, Elsewhere... and more said...

Hey Jessica, I like this :)

Mike said...

I don't get it. Did they just finish having sex?

Jessica said...

Thanks...I just might. :)

Thanks, and you're right.

Hey Dad,
Thanks. :)

Thanks, I am good. For me this poem is positive. :)

Thanks!! :)

Um, definitely not. But, as I look at it,again, with that in mind...I can see how one might read that into it! Especially a guy. :) lol

Chris O. said...

Wow, you should defently try and get that published.

Jessica said...

Thanks...I'm going to get a few together, and then start submitting. :)